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Contest prize for Pending details (89)
Various trades and stuff of the currently secret variety (89-99)

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Drum roll please...

With 100% of the vote, a unanimous victory, and far outdoing all competitors the winner is...

[link] !

Anyone who paid attention shouldn't be surprised as it was the only entry, but TW note me with a request in one of the categories mentioned in my contest post and I'll do all I can to make it excellent for you.

So everyone round of applause for the free critiques for TW as that's what he requested!





Over all PowerFull [link] is a short and to the point piece, well put together, and entertaining. I'm starting with this in my 3 critiques for the skilled for winning my contest so here goes!

Take all of my comments with a grain of salt as this is 99% subjective stuff.

Over all, excellent way of starting off directly in the action, it's a powerful way to make a quick impact.

"She rubbed the massive dome of her belly, relishing every moment, every kick from within. She traced the outline of a hand with her fingertip before pressing down against it, forcing it back. Hefting her belly she felt its occupants move in their tightly confined space; still trying to find a means of escape. Her stomach rumbled, beginning its digestive cycle, the first of many."

Perhaps a replacement of the 'within. She' section with "within; her fingers tips traced the outline of a hand straining against its taut surface. Once her finger danced over the contours of its form, she forced it back toward the heart of the sphere, roudning out her stomach once more." In order to avoid starting two sentences in a row with 'She'. The last sentence seems full of power but could use slight tweaking in order to bring out a greater amount of this piece's potential, mayhaps adjusting its punctuation to the far more dramatic ellipses than a comma post digestive cycle.

"She shifted again, allowing herself access to another portion of her girth. Part of a foot and an elbow poked out from her skin, she rubbed her hand over them, causing their owners to squirm again."

The first and second part are a little muddled in their connection, perhaps altering the information toward something along the lines of 'She shifted again, giving her eagerly rubbing hand access to another portion of her girth.' This way you can avoid having the slightly broken feeling at the beginning, and the clunky placement of hand in the secondary section.

"She shuddered in pleasure as she felt the movement, the stretched skin of her belly hypersensitive to all touch and movements within. Gently she traced a circle on her skin, closing her eyes with the pure ecstasy that she felt. The power, the control, the fullness… was an aphrodisiac to her. Each movement from within, each time she touched her taut skin, caused her to reach higher and higher levels of pleasure."

Adding some kind of adjective to the movement and making it a more sultry word like motion may be of assistance, the second part of that sentence feels a little clunky and could potentially use adjusting. The next part feels very telling and not showing. Removing the 'that she felt' and rephrasing the prior part can vastly increase the impact of the statement. The next part I don't think is best served by ellipses. Take all of those factors and connect it to the aphrodisiatic state some how, 'the power, the control, the fullness, every sensation of her predatory achievement aroused her to more intense pleasure.'

"However, like all things, her pleasure came to an end. Her prey soon ceased its struggles and she, exhausted from her large meal, fell asleep."

Nice succinct ending, I think that something that tied the states of calm between her belly and her mind as she drifts into slumber would be a more fitting ending, though all of this is quite well done and I can see why a myriad of people appreciate it!

Once again people, go and visit this piece along with others in TW's gallery!




Next piece to be covered... [link]

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Contest prize for Pending details (89)
Various trades and stuff of the currently secret variety (89-99)

--ChrIsicera

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Howdy all! While waiting to see if there were any new entries in my contest I ran across 's journal and thought I'd participate in the feature chain. First ten people to comment in here get me to feature 3 of their pieces that I find the most interesting in this journal so others can see your pretty work and go visit your gallery/watch you.

So without further stalling...

1 was kind enough to get me into this, thus the feature!
- [link] People supporting the art community by showing how they work is always cool, from pencil work to photoshop lines, a tutorial! It's in Spanish which I only understand cognates in, but just looking at the helpful images lets me understand it for the most part.
- [link] I'm a sucker for gals with bloated bellies belching, this is similar to the kind of vore work some of you enjoy from my gallery so go check it out! Although if I'd done it you know there would be overwhelming effects on said belch. >.>
- [link] This is a nice dual character piece that has a nice color scheme and is wonderfully varied from the mess of fan art that normally appears on DA, Original characters FTW!

2 One of my good buddies who is super talented check this stuff out! I've even collaborated with him a lot!
- [link] awesome, slimy, really pretty looking piece! Although I'm not a fan of genitalia in there, tis bloody well done across the board!
- [link] Would you really call one of the old ones a cougar? Well no matter what this is really well done and looks absolutely gorgeous!
- [link] I'm biased, so sue me. This is a really well established environment with cool character designs and a nice style!

3 's stuff is pretty cool! I'm sure some of you will like it a lot and you'll be happy to find that unlike me Bing posts a lot! Take advantage of how often they submit awesome stuff to DA!
- [link] Heh, dialogue like that I'd definitely support, though IRL I wouldn't have anywhere near the guts to get my self into that sweet of a situation. >.< Cool piece over all!
- [link] A full comic + a sexy belch? Definitely a nice piece!
- [link] although I don't think this is Bingfox's best work over all, what was really excellentely done in this piece is the perfect organic hair shape which I fail at all the time myself.

4 A good friend who I've done things for a myriad of times! DAS will live forever! >.>
- [link] First one definitely partly from bias thanks to his awesomeness. partly because of the nice relationship depiction in this piece that I highly prefer.
- [link] I've been a fan for a long time, I think this was actually either the first or third story I read by TW so it has a special place with me. Also the fact that a great deal of predators are in it I highly approve of and think people should follow his lead on that account more often!
- [link] a poignant excerpt feel keeps this piece albeit short entertaining and this variety is a welcome addition to his broad array of excellent pieces!

5 Although I'm not too familiar with this cool person they have some interesting things in their gallery!
- [link] This makes me want to bust out with Sentinel, Dhalsim, and Magneto and wreck havoc on the little Kobun. >.>
- [link] Interesting matrixy piece that has cool rectangular patterns!
- [link] the one on the top left if the hat were purple it would be the pimpingest dog to ever limp. He needs a pimp bone of some kind.

6 This is an incredibly talented artist I've known of for an eternity, before I started drawing even, and his magnificent talent is beyond comparison, I'm honored to present some of his stuff in my journal here! Although I'm only selecting 3 he has a LOT of cool stuff in his gallery, go check it out!
- [link] This holiday themed piece is beautiful, I like the painted belly, the colors, the concept, all of it is quite awesome!
- [link] dual SSBBW girls together with nice figures and over all incredibly drawn? Excellent stuff!
- [link] although not of my preferred content, this piece is ridiculously well done, especially on the pose, feel, and execution of the piece!

7 :Iconfanficfetishest: Wow! A lot of old school awesome watches my channel cause I have Satsurou and FFF on here now, woo! His writing is stuff I read back when stuffed was still online! He has a ton of really good stuff of varied types, although I'm selecting 3, read through his stuff when you have a chance.
- [link] The concept of within character competition was pretty entertaining. I enjoyed it greatly and sure many of you will too!
- [link] probably one of my oldschool favorites for sure. This piece has dual predators, one of my favorite things, and predators eating predators! <3 Go check it out now!
- [link] couldn't decide which of these to post so went from the beginning, this had guest stars that were seriously the who's who of the time, and all the people involved need respect, so show it ya young whipper snappers.
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--ChrIsicera

Current projects:
REAL LIFE STUFF (1-86)
Trade with the talented PENDING DETAILS (87)
Potential trade with the masterful Pending details (88)
Various trades and stuff of the currently secret variety (89-99)

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Edit2: This has been extended until november 7th since a few people hadn't heard about it but are interested!
Edit!: Although no entries have yet been recieved the contest is still open another 5 days! Updating prize quality assuming between 7 and 15 people enter so that the prizes will be of this quality art wise! [link] hope some people are enticed to join in! Remember, you don't need to be some master artist to make this, creativity is many times more important than execution!

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Howdy all! Chrisis here doing an impromptu mini contest piece!

This isn't something that needs to be long or drawn out just something quick if you want to waste 20 minutes of your day or so!

I've uploaded this piece [link] and as you all know I'm a fan of egregiously belching females so as opposed to my normal drawing out an odd green blackish cloud I want to see everyone's attempts at what they would do for an over exaggerated belch on this piece! You already have your character, no defining scenery or anything else. Your skills can be purely typographical with a custom cool font like thing you make, or it can be effects, even 3D particles, animation, whatever! Just have fun and make something to show the monumental nature of said belch!

As far as prizes go, it'll depend on how many people enter, so getting more people to join can actually increase your chances of winning if you do something awesome!

The top 15% of entrants will get prizes! So if there are 20 entrants, 3 people get a prize, and despite this contest only taking you from potentially under 5 minutes to at most an hour or two to get it just how you have the piece envisioned!

Winners in that top 15% get their choice of a mini story, (1-4 pages, nothing real as this is a mini contest) A quick coloration of something for you, (Speedy coloring job, blocked in lights and darks could be either painterly or soft brushed can send file in PSD for full editability etc.) Aline sketch, (although not something I'm particularly awesome at I'm happy to work it out for ya!) and finally full in detail critique and red line on three pieces in your gallery, linking all of them for A: more traffic for you, and B: the ability to take your already excellent work and make it even better!

Winners will be decided by a poll at the end of October, most votes = win, really simple albeit potentially unfair, may also do honorable mentions for those who I think did quite excellently but didn't convince the others as much.

Submissions can either be linked on my main page, on this journal, or noted to me!

I can't wait to see what the creative people who watch me will do! *Assuming anyone decides to actually join.*
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--ChrIsicera

Current projects:
REAL LIFE STUFF (1-86)
Trade with the talented PENDING DETAILS (87)
Potential trade with the masterful Pending details (88)
Various trades and stuff of the currently secret variety (89-99)

A big thank you to :Iconzewhatcher: for getting me back the pretty close to necessary 120 thumbnails per page, and other various nice features! Go visit his page and thank him for me. Finished some trades with various people, but mainly been working on IRL stuff. I would like to thank :Icon4ofswords: For being the voice of reason that kept me from acting on the very stupid ideas in my head as suicide doesn't solve anything. Currently going through relationship difficulties, it's bloody painful but not like that's anything new.

For those of you who've read the pseudo paragraph before here and have interests relatively similar to mine you get a bonus thing of some writing.com stuff!

I was chatting with ms. AW_Bassist as I do on the rare times she's online and since I was too emo from my relationship stuff to RP both of us contributed a few chapters to fatties eating fatties 2.0! [link] This thread just went from one option long a month ago, to mayhaps 10 as of today.

As always if anyone has the time contributing to writing.com stuff is cool, and since you've bothered to deal with my stupid self shilling of awful writing you get the real bonus of a random never to be finished vore drawing [link]

Current projects:
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Trade with the talented PENDING DETAILS (87)
Potential trade with the masterful Pending details (88)
Various trades and stuff of the currently secret variety (89-99)

--ChrIsicera

I'm back, lets see, my Subscription to DA wore out which is rather sad so it would be cool to renew it at some point, though as per normal I'm not the most financially well off person so can't do so. Some of the craziness.

Billo the Clown supports the public option now, hell has frozen over. [link]

14% of New Jersey Republicans believe Obama is the Anti-Christ [link]

Random uber shmexiness though these girls all need to learn to operate pizzas. [link] (Belches in thar.)

Been uber cravey lately, need to work on various things, mainly think I'll fix the things on my piece with first.

That's all... for now.

--ChrIsicera